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Wednesday, May 31, 2023

Pygmalion and My Fair Lady by George Bernard Shaw

    Even after all my years of reading, I have yet to decipher what exactly is the special kind of magic that makes a story ‘timeless.’ Philosophically, we could probably challenge the idea of ‘timelessness’ as a concept, but there’s still something about the premise of George Bernard Shaw’s Pygmalion that feels universal. It’s influence has clearly permeated into pop culture, but if you aren’t familiar with it via osmosis, I’ll outline the central story below.

    Eliza Doolittle is a low-class girl who sells flowers, sometimes with a penchant for scammish behaviour. Henry Higgins is a phonetics professor who has studied, essentially, linguistics, and can decipher all ranges of accent. After a chance encounter on a rainy night where he places Eliza’s accent (and makes her think he’s reporting her to the authorities), Eliza arrives at Higgins’ home seeking a tutor so that she can speak in a more proper fashion. Higgins and Pickering take her on as a project (or in their words: an ‘experiment’) and bet that they can trick people into believing that Eliza is an upper-class lady within six months. If this seems familiar and you were alive in the 90s, Pygmalion is She’s all That with Freddie Prinze Jr. and Rachel Leigh Cook.


    Of course, Pygmalion is also the basis for My Fair Lady. but doing a compare / contrast of the play and its film seems less fruitful than examining some of the other literary connections I picked up on throughout the play. I suspect that, at least in some respects, Pygmalion is an extension of Shakespeare’s The Taming of the Shrew, especially when we catch a glimpse of Higgins’ lessons with Eliza. Higgins and Petruchio share a cruelty that makes it hard to find your allegiance with them. Incidentally, and probably because of my interest in education, I would have liked to have seen more of Higgins’ lessons with Eliza. I think there could have been some fruitful scenes of thematic and character development that would enrich the play and provide fuel for academic fires. In the script for My Fair Lady, Alan Jay Lerner expands on that a bit, but not quite enough to be satisfying in a pedagogical regard.


    While the play does not fully emphasize its pedagogical concerns, there’s enough there to draw an interesting connection to Mary Shelley’s Frankenstein. In Frankenstein, the creature is created only to be immediately abandoned by his creator. The creature later spies on a family where the father reads the children John Milton’s Paradise Lost, among other things. Their education then inspires in the creature a sense of morality and a legalistic mindset that he leverages against his creator. Twice in Pygmalion, Higgins references Milton: once in an account of the greatest minds of England, and once when he derides Eliza by saying, “I waste the treasures of my Miltonic mind by spreading them before you” (85). Milton seems to form the basis of moral feeling and pedagogy in both works and nothing can convince me of it being a coincidence, especially given the plot parallels.


    Frankenstein, to me, is a timeless story, and Pygmalion seems to draw from that same well. While the play starts quite slowly, eventually Higgins and Pickering pass Eliza off as a member of the elite. Like Frankenstein, he creates new life and abandons it. He sees his project of ‘creating’ Eliza: “The hardest job I ever tackled [...] you have no idea how frightfully interesting it is to take a human being and change her into a quite different human being by creating a new speech for her. It’s filling up the deepest gulf that separates class from class and soul from soul” (53). Upon their return from their experiment, though, the men discuss how trying the process has been and how bored they’ve been by it. Meanwhile, Eliza is acting like a devoted puppy to Higgins, bringing him his slippers but listening in as they speak as if she did not exist. The scene is powerful and absolutely gutting. The scene is an easy standout with a similar gravity to the scene where Frankenstein’s creature, having been abandoned by his own creator, is told that the doctor will never create a companion for him or fulfil any of his fatherly obligations. Higgins’ callousness is comparable to Frankenstein’s emotional impotence.


    The central question—or rather problem—of Pygmalion is brought forward by Mrs. Higgins, Higgins’ mother, and pertains to the ethics of the play and Shelley’s novel. Mrs. Higgins points out to the men that they have failed to consider “the problem of what is to be done with [Eliza] afterwards” (54). Their concern is the success of the experiment. Her concern is the collateral damage following its success. I appreciate Mrs. Higgins’ challenge to their work because she adds an ethical dimension to the premise that seems highly transferable to other areas. Both the play and the film script allude to Eliza no longer being fit for regular society but unable to support her own lifestyle following the success of the experiment. This is one instance where I think a whole additional play could be written to explore the actual limitations of a life following such a high degree of interference.


    Actually, there’s a novel that explores essentially the very issue that was published around 20 years earlier: The Picture of Dorian Gray by Oscar Wilde, which is another book I’d consider ‘timeless.’ In both texts, we have men engaged in “experiments” that play off the innocence and naivety of a younger person. Lord Henry (coincidence that Henry Higgins shares a name?) seduces Dorian with alternative views on morality that lead him down a hedonistic path. There are two central similarities that I find compelling. First is the way the male leads justify their morals with scientific language. In both stories, there’s a sense that science need not be connected with ethics. The second connection is that very discussion of morality. In Shaw’s play, “middle class morality” is often derided as being ineffectual.


    Despite not playing much of a role in the plot, Eliza’s father serves as an intriguing foil to his daughter. Both are elevated to a higher status, and Alfred Doolittle, like his daughter, is mortified at his new position. Whereas in The Picture of Dorian Gray, the characters pursue exquisite pleasures (like cigarettes), Alfred Doolittle makes an impassioned plea to not be spoiled. He identifies himself as an “undeserving poor.” When he comes to Henry Higgins’ home, he says, “Think of what that means to a man. It means that he’s up agen [sic] the middle class morality all the time. If theres [sic] anything going, and I put in for a bit of it, it’s always the same story: ‘Youre [sic] undeserving, so you cant [sic] have it.’ But my needs is as great as the most deserving widow’s that ever got money out of six different charities in one week for the death of the same husband” (35). It actually makes me think of Shakespeare; Hamlet seems to prove a font of wisdom. When Polonius tells Hamlet that he’ll take care of the actors according to how they deserve, Hamlet says to treat them better: “God’s bodkin, man, much better: use every man after his desert, and who shall ‘scape whipping? Use them after your own honor and dignity – the less they deserve, the more merit is in your bounty” (II.ii.528-531). I’ve always found Hamlet’s logic here beautiful: treat people better than they deserve; the less they deserve, the more it is to your credit. By extension, Alfred Doolittle takes on the moral conscience of the play: treat people well, especially when they’re undeserving. Don’t conform to the middle class morality that demands people ‘earn’ their right to good treatment. Perhaps that’s an element that makes literature timeless: it advocates for the most downtrodden in society and never punches down. Doolittle continues, “I dont [sic] need less than a deserving man: I need more. I dont eat less hearty than him; and I drink a lot more [...] well, they charge me just the same for everything as they charge the deserving” (35). “What is middle class morality?” Doolittle asks, “Just an excuse for never giving me anything. [...] I aint pretending to be deserving. Im undeserving; and I mean to go on being undeserving” (35). The line of logic is hard to resist and it seems important enough that he gives one of the longest monologues in the play, which is also preserved in the film script.


    The play deals with some big issues, like morality, though obliquely. In most cases, the concepts are dramatized rather than given long didactic monologues. The play gives a clear discourse on language and its relationship to class. Essentially, one could follow the thread to see that language is intrinsically linked to identity. It’s divisive because on the one hand speaking the language clearly is supposed to elevate a person’s status, but potentially at the expense of their identities [Higgins says he gives Eliza a new soul, after all]. I think one could easily find parallels here to colonial discourse as well: in crass and outdated terms, Higgins ‘elevates’ the ‘savage’ Eliza, who then is removed from her context and unable to return to her former state. There’s some comparisons to be drawn between colonial powers imposing their language on a people, and the people no longer being able to engage with one another in the same way. 


    In terms of the actual play, I alluded to a few elements from a writing perspective. I think the play is somewhat unbalanced; the opening takes a long time that could have been (and partially is) condensed in My Fair Lady. It isn’t until the fourth act that I felt it was truly gripping. The conversation the men have, ignoring Eliza, and her reaction is superb. The richness of her character and the dynamic she has with Higgins is complicated and layered. In the final act of the play, the tension is ramped up and Shaw’s stage directions offer motives, intentions, and emotional responses that aren’t necessarily written into the dialogue that flesh out Eliza’s character in a complex and surprising way. In particular, the way she enjoys rattling Higgins is worth discussing—but I feel I need to see some performances to see how others have interpreted these moments.


    Between Pygmalion and My Fair Lady, there are some differences, but none I feel particularly inclined to discuss. The main difference, of course, is the songs. I haven’t heard them, so I might have different favourites after actually hearing them, but I thought the most interesting addition was the song “Show Me”, which decries words in romantic relationships. In part, it reads: “Haven’t your lips / Longed for my touch? / Don’t say how much, / Show me! Show me! // Don’t talk of love lasting through time. / Make me no undying vow. / Show me now!” Given that the play is so intently focused on the connection of language, manners, class, identity, and so on, I like how this song just completely rejects the philosophy underlying the rest of the play. Eliza tries to find love through a material realism that rejects the lofty idealism of Higgins-types. The counterpoint, especially its placement in the play, is a wonderful addition that lets the final scene breathe while further complicating central themes in the text.


    I’m not really any closer to determining what makes a classic a classic, the timeless timeless, the universal universal, and so on, but I will say that Pygmalion is a play worthy of discussion. Books can be memorable for different reasons. Some books speak to the heart, or the mind, or the soul. In this case, For me, Pygmalion is more of an intellectually memorable story, but if its cultural significance is any indication, it’s a play that speaks to peoples’ hearts and souls as well.


    In short, it’s worth the read. Thanks to Heather for giving me a (possibly stolen) copy of this book.


    Happy reading!


Sellout: The Major Label Feeding Frenzy That Swept Punk, Emo, and Hardcore 1994-2007 by Dan Ozzi

    
    Reading a history of punk rock makes it seem both incredibly close and inexplicably distant. I was (maybe) in middle school when I made my way into the pit at my first punk show and I remember it, in retrospect, as a highly divisive scene. When online music sharing became commonplace, it seemed to coincide with a bunch of arguments over which bands were Real Punk and which bands were Posers. Rancid and NOFX were held up as real punks; Blink-182 and Sum 41 were posers. Unbeknownst to me, these debates of which bands sold out predate my entry to the scene by at least a few years.

    Dan Ozzi’s Sellout: The Major Label Feeding Frenzy That Swept Punk, Emo, and Hardcore 1994-2007 is an incisive look at what, when I think about it, was a wild time in underground music. In the book, Ozzi is a rock journalist that examines the career trajectory of 11 bands that made the leap from the independent music scene to major labels. While the chapters are organized chronologically by release date of mainstream albums, the book has a neat layering effect where you see the overlap and crossover in the stories he recounts.


    Patterns seem to emerge after reading some of these tales from the road and the label offices. Bands get approached by record label A&Rs, sometimes with aggressive wining and dining. In some cases, there’s an initial reluctance from the band before things get real and then bands dive in. In some cases, particularly as we drift out of the 90s and into the early 2000s, the discussion of selling out seems to die down. It’s no longer the crucial question in the punk scene, and so there seems to be a broader acceptance of major labels and in the case of bands like Rise Against or Against Me! there’s a recognition of the potential benefit to a major label and much less reluctance in jumping ship. That said, in many cases the jump to a major does seem to destroy a band for various reasons. Some make it out, others get eaten.


    Ozzi’s journalism is highly effective in telling compelling stories. The actual narrativization of these bands’ experiences makes them seem like characters in a novel. I think that stands out in particular for the chapter on Jawbreaker’s Dear You. Maybe it’s just how reality is, but the story is structured like a tragedy: a band claiming they’ll never sell out before being compelled to the majors only to be rife with internal dissent afterward. The characterization of Jawbreaker frontman Blake Schwarzenbach is particularly touching, giving the chapter these sense of poetry and despair. 


    At the book’s best, Ozzi is able to give me a new appreciation for bands I care nothing or less than nothing about. For instance, I’m not a huge Green Day fan but the framing of them as the first punk band to really ‘make it’ is a compelling rags to riches story enhanced by the backlash that happened along the way. The most memorable moment to me is that there was a club where punk bands played that refused to let any ‘sellouts’ play there, including Green Day, despite the fact that that’s where they started. It’s kind of amazing to hear about the op-eds from Maximum RocknRoll that ripped into them for the change, as well. 


    One of the most impressive feats Ozzi pulls off is getting me to actually respect Thursday a little bit. When they got huge in high school I found them unlistenable—the punk in me rejected their emocore super stardom. It was compelling to hear about their punk rock roots and some of their politics. I had some recollection of when the drama happened with Victory records, but it wasn’t until this book that I really felt like I got the full context (even if I still have a hard time believing in Thursday’s sincerity as a band). At the very least, Ozzi gave me new appreciation for Thursday, even if sonically I still haven’t made it through a song.


    By the same token, My Chemical Romance is given a pretty glowing retrospective. I remember I saw MCR in 2004 opening for Face to Face’s farewell tour. After My Chem played, a younger group in the crowd left while my sister and I shook our heads: “how can they miss out on Face to Face’s farewell?” Ozzi actually cites a similar phenomenon happening in the early days of MCR, but gives it an interesting spin. He talks about how My Chemical Romance was appealing to weirdos that didn’t really fit in in the punk scene, and how their more effeminate performances made space for young women and queer youth. It really puts things in a different light hearing about how vocally anti-misogynist, anti-racist, etc. Gerard Way was in the early days of MCR. People would call Way the f-slur for being more feminine and that has really forced me to reconsider some of my history with the Warped Tour. Please allow me this not-so-brief tangent to add to the history of MCR.


    In 2004, punk band Guttermouth was kicked off of the Warped Tour. They released a statement that in 2023 reads as an abysmally bad take, but at the time it at least kind of felt like the ‘punk’ thing to do. They got into some trouble over politics. It was the years of the Not My President T-shirts and the Rock Against Bush compilations. Well, Guttermouth opposed groupthink in punk rock, which was definitely a hit. They also made fun of some other bands on the tour and in their statement Guttermouth writes, “They ran to daddy and told some of the brass that Guttermouth is making fun of us while they play. Well, they were right, I was, but only the fashion bands and groups who focused more on their make up and choo choo train hats than the music they play. [...] Punk and censorship do not exactly go hand in hand. So dry your eyes or your eye shadow will run.” At the time, it was pretty widely speculated that these comments were directed towards Avenged Sevenfold and My Chemical Romance. If true, I feel like MCR came out on top here—it’s easy to imagine them calling out the homophobia and gay panic that Guttermouth probably leaned on for their humour and it stands to reason that Gerard Way was on the right side of history, music aside.


    Speaking of old school punk jerks, Rancid gets a justly unkind treatment in the chapter on The Distillers. Again, at the time, it was easy to see The Distillers’ sound as being a ripoff of Rancid. Brody Dalle’s vocals on City of Angels, for instance, could be transplanted with Tim Armstrong’s pretty seamlessly. At the time it was easy to write off The Distillers as a bit of a knockoff. But, it’s pretty heartbreaking to hear about Dalle’s struggles, first with drugs and later with Rancid. Rancid, with all their punk cred, went about burning Brody Dalle to the ground after her split from Armstrong. Some of the quotes in the book really paint Rancid in a bad light, operating like the mafia, as it’s described at one point. They criticized The Distillers publically after Dalle signed to a major—only to then turn around themselves and sign to a major, which is its own weird B-plot for the Distillers chapter. People were trying to coax Rancid into signing with a major for quite some time; Madonna tried to convince them to sign with a major by sending them a nude photo (like what?!). When they did sign, even gloriously spectacular music journalist and Canadian national treasure Nardwuar failed to get information out of Rancid after their switch to a major label.


    When you hear all of these stories, Ozzi really does make the timeline seem explosive. The fact that At the Drive-In exploded so early (2000) but that Thursday exploded so late (2003), that there was only three years in between, and that everything in this sentence shocks me, is wild. Ozzi has a way of reflecting my history back to me that is both refreshing and unsettling. Bands that I had considered subversive had already been swallowed up by majors as I was growing up and I had no idea that they had ‘sold out’ (I guess the discourse had partly faded from memory).


    I think punks also like to pretend that they’re in their own world, an elite of rebels against the capitalist machine, so it’s strange to hear, for instance, how many people are connected to Jimmy Eat World’s producers, or how Bono gave At the Drive-in advice to hang in there when their transition to a major was sending them into a downward spiral. Even hearing that it was Pennywise that really went to bat for Blink-182 is a pretty strange combination when you consider the poppy vibes of Blink-182 against the straightforward punk rock Fuck Authority. Similarly, hearing the way that Blink-182 basically revitalized the Warped Tour is wild (if not as surprising). It was kind of neat to hear, too, about the Warped Tour tradition (however frustrating), of rotating daily schedules in the spirit of a more democratic, egalitarian approach to large festivals. Sidenote: lots of bad things happened because of Warped Tour that aren’t addressed in this book, but I’ll give it at least a little bit of credit for maintaining a punk rock ethos in its schedule. 


    Sellout is a great trip down memory lane that offers a new angle for appreciating bands. Ozzi addresses the racism towards At the Drive-in and the sexism toward The Donnas tactfully and with a clear angle that those are dark stains on the punk rock community and beyond. At the Drive-in in particular is given such a compelling account that it really makes me want to listen to their records over again. Even little details like how Rise Against ended up with Swing Life Away and State of the Union on the same album—and how they thought soccer moms would be in for a surprise if they bought Siren Song of the Counterculture for Swing Life Away—are nice touches.


    I’m certain the book could be expanded into something much broader, as well. I remember a few years back The Swellers broke up and released a long essay about how hard it is to be a mid-tier band, bigger than a local but always tour support for someone else, and how financially unviable it is. I’d love to hear some more stories of those that tried to make the jump or couldn’t quite make the jump and how things are for them. The Ataris would be well-served having their story told in this kind of format, though their story really bums me out.


    Sellout was a really pleasurable read. It was like all those Behind the Music things, but because of the context I felt so much more connected to it. Ultimately and primarily, it’s a work of journalism and history, so I recognize that this was not the purpose of the book, but I would have liked to hear a bit more regarding the tension between selling out or staying independent. I’m fascinated by the question of what the possibility for genuine dissent is when it comes to the market. So often subversion is annexed by the mainstream and furthers the interests of capital, so I would have liked to have seen a bit more of an actual case being made one way or the other. I suspect that Ozzi doesn’t find the question of whether it’s right to sell out as a very fruitful conversation—he’s more interested in the realities of what does happen. That said, I would have liked to hear a more philosophical slant emerge. While you get some strange defenders of selling out, like Ben Weasel from Screeching Weasel, the arguments against selling out all seem to get subsumed when a band recognizes they also have to make a living.


    Propagandhi is the best punk band (or any band) in the world. Their worst record opens with a lyric that I find endlessly resonant in trying to find the balance of communicating to the masses while staying true to the vision of an alternative to the capitalist nightmare we’ve created:


Dance and laugh and play,
Ignore the message we convey.
It seems we’re only here to entertain.
A rebellion cut-to-fit,
Well I refuse to be the soundtrack to it—

We entertain, we’re still knee-deep in shit.

There’s something wrong inside,

We played it safe, enjoyed the ride.

You won’t like this but I’ve something to confide.

We stand for something more

Than a faded sticker on a skateboard,

We’ve rained on your parade,

We’re out the door.


As I wrap up this review about the history of punk, I can’t help but wonder about its future. I want to hold onto a vision of punk that gives outsiders a place, emboldens the spirit of solidarity (not unity, but I’ll leave that for now), and drives change in the world. I grapple with questions of TINA* capitalism (*There Is No Alternative) and the sincerity of praxis in a mass market—but also recognize that people should be able to live by their art.


    These are some tough questions that Sellout doesn’t really delve into, but I’m still very satisfied with my history book for the month. Hopefully I’ll live through some more really exciting moments for punk music. Hopefully you will too.


    See you in the pit.


Sunday, May 28, 2023

Migritude by Shailja Patel

    Let’s, for a moment, consider collage as a medium. Collage draws together pieces of various disparate sources to compile a new image. The histories of its components cling to the final product’s skin, become part of it, and yet something new has formed that, in the best cases, surpasses the sum of its parts. This is where we land with Shailja Patel’s Migritude, which is a cross-medium amalgam that proves the perfect creative outlet for a cross-generational, cross-continental storytelling.

    Migritude entered the world as a stage production in which Patel unpacks eighteen saris her mother passed onto her and weaves them into a narrative of migration. Having been born in Kenya, Patel offers an insightful perspective of her family history alongside broader global events (like Idi Amin’s expulsion of Asians from Uganda), tracing their journey to the United States. The explorations are varied and incisive, and, while I would have loved to see the performance, Migritude in book form does everything in its power to replicate the multimodal experience of a live show.


    The very design of the book is an assemblage. There’s a foreword by Vijay Prashad, Migritude itself, and a poetic account of the saris in the suitcase (think: Gertrude Stein’s Tender Buttons for eighteen fashion items). Following those elements there is what is called the “Shadow Book”, which includes drafts and cut material from Migritude, followed by a collection of poems, and finally a book called “The Journey” that provides a timeline of Migritude’s production and a few interviews and reflections following the performances. Like Patel’s collage-like identity, Migritude draws from different elements. Moreover, even within Migritude there are a series of different components that come together for a cohesive whole: poems, photographs, drawings, letters written in the voices of different family members, and historical data. The pieces of the work speak to one another to tell the full story.


    In at least a few ways, Shailja Patel’s play script reminds me of Fronteras Americanas by Guillermo Verdecchia. Verdecchia is more comedic and abrasive and Patel is more emotive and affectionate, but both draw on historical data to criticize the colonial enterprise. While Verdecchia’s incendiary commentary on U.S. imperialism in Argentina and Latin America draws on historical factotum for its vehemence, Patel’s usage is more sobering in its critique. There’s a dark irony in her presentation:


“We were the model the rest of Africa was supposed to look to! A happy, multiracial nation where Whites, Asians, and Africans all lived in harmony. // In Kenya’s war of independence, fewer than 100 whites and over 25, 000 Africans died. Half of the Africans who died were children under ten. // Sixty thousand white settlers lived in Kenya at independence in 1963. The new Kenyan government was required to take loans of 12.5 million pounds from its ex-colonial master, the British government. To buy back stolen land from settlers who wished to leave” (19).


The use of facts is so wonderfully strategic; the last two sentences of that passage alone serve as a scathing indictment of colonialism. It’s illuminating to see its far-reaching effects and ongoing influence running parallel to Patel’s family’s personal history. The Western ethos falls under broader critique. One of the most memorable moments—since it seems so far removed from the other cultural touchstones of the text—is actually a reference to Metallica:


Here’s how Empire congratulates itself:
Favourite American torture technique: blast Metallica music at victims until they scream, weep, lose bladder and bowel control. Metallica’s James Hetfield is proud that my music is culturally offensive. If they’re not used to freedom, I’m glad to be a part of the exposure. (37-38).

The notion of freedom, as seen from a Western point of view, takes on horrific connotations in this reframing. “Freedom” by force: as if bombarding them with unwelcome heavy metal is a gift. There’s a directness in Patel’s presentation that requires little commentary: the facts sprinkled throughout speak for themselves.

    The irony in the imperial project is that those subjected to it do, in fact, take on the qualities of their oppressors. For more information, I highly recommend reading Frantz Fanon’s The Wretched of the Earth, which explores the double-consciousness of colonial subjects, We see that reflected in Patel’s account of her schooling and their creative writing projects:


    We set them in European or US cities and schools and inserted ourselves into those landscapes. Or we stole freely from US sitcoms and soaps – Good Times, Dallas. One of my classmates, in an essay on “The Dangers of Hitchhiking,” reproduced, blow by blow, an episode of Diff’rent Strokes that had run the previous night on Kenyan TV. Didn’t even change the names of the characters—just cast herself in the starring role. The English teacher commented, You should use your own ideas in future! And gave her a mark of 75%. // In all those years, there was only one teacher who ever challenged this erasure of our own lives. Ironically, he was a British expatriate. He asked my Standard Seven class why we used English names and places in our compositions instead of Kenyan ones. We stared at him, confused: a classroom of 11 year olds, who had never imagined that our reality had any place in literature. Finally, one girl raised her hand: That’s what is in the books we read. (83)


What makes Patel’s critique refreshing is how it highlights the inner contradictions in the logic of cultural imperialism. The fact that a British expatriate is the one to challenge the cultural consciousness of the Kenyan children is a detail destabilizing in its irony, assuring no easy resolution for global conflict.


    And yet, the critique of the West is clear. Patel highlights the difference in mindset between African and American thinking: “We calibrate hunger precisely. Define enough differently from you. Enough is what’s available, shared between everyone present. We are incapable of saying, as you can so easily: Sorry, there’s not enough for you” (33). Earlier, I compared Patel to Verdecchia but this passage highlights Patel’s poetic sensibilities. The idea of “calibrating hunger” is a beautifully apt phrase for encapsulating an entire mindset.  The construction of the sentences also provides a varied rhythm. The combination of short and long produces a tempo that empowers the sentiments, Point. Point. Full explanation. Reprise. It’s nicely developed.


    I recognize I’ve focused this review primarily on the political commentary of the work at the expense of the more personal and familial. Truth be told, those elements were somewhat less resonant for me. That said, the central premise that incites the narrative is endearing in its quiet rebellion. Patel’s mother gives her the box of saris preemptively, rather than waiting for her to be married. The tenderness of that understanding and the deviation from expectations is really wonderful to see. Elsewhere, Patel lists words that do not exist in English (Najjar, Garba, Arati) and words that do not exist in Gujarati, among which she lists “self-expression,” “individual,” and “lesbian.” Those few lines are so suggestive of Patel’s experience, though there’s an ambiguity that is not fully addressed in the interviews which follow the collection. Those intimations of experience, to me, were more powerful than the more fully fleshed out interactions with family.


    To return to the central metaphor of Migritude as a collage, we see pieces of Patel throughout: those pieces formed by family, by colonial experience, and those pieces which are, perhaps, innate. Blending fragments of experience and historical fact elevates the experience to more than a facile or unidimensional narrative. Certainly, Migritude is more than the sum of its parts. More than any one instrument, is an orchestra, and it is probably only multiple listens that will reveal its full range of nuances.

    
    Happy reading—and be ready to buy tickets to Migritude if there’s ever another live performance.

Thursday, May 25, 2023

Hello, My Name Is Henry by Micah Schnabel

    Micah Schnabel is a musician that writes beautiful, tragic, happysad, funny, sincere, poetic songs and I adore him for it. He plays in punk bands like Two Cow Garage and Call Me Rita, but I am perpetually stunned by his work as a solo artist and it would break my heart to find out he wasn’t the radically authentic, kind, timid person I perceive him to be. I’ve provided an obscene amount of adjectives in these first sentences, but I want to emphasize how much I appreciate his musical endeavours [a playlist provided for you in the comments section while you read this review]. You can imagine how surprised I was to find out he had written a novel, a discovery which was promptly followed by a purchase.

    Hello, My Name Is Henry is a debut slice-of-life novel that expands upon the narrative recounted in Micah Schnabel’s song of the same name from his album Your New Norman Rockwell. The titular character in both is a 28 year old man working at a convenience store who feels that life is passing by around him but can’t seem to escape the cycle of poverty and mental illness that hovers around his past. The book is a pretty scathing critique of Americana—more on that shortly—and has a direct tone that reads like a progressive version of Bukowski.


    The novel retains the sincerity of Schnabel’s lyrics, though often presents itself as more prosaic than his musical work. I think of the way he builds scenes in “#33 Dryer” and “Emergency Room” as essentially perfect illustrations-in-words. The novel is somewhat more on-the-nose in tackling issues, with the central character often narrating exactly what the problems in America are: systemic poverty in small communities and the lack of responsiveness of politicians, the proliferation of harmful addictions and the shocking attempts to reduce the accessibility of naloxone (even among first responders!!), racism, toxic masculinity, and so on. I agree with essentially all of his views—and I appreciate that some of the minor conflicts in the book are Henry responding to homophobic and racial slurs; the way he strives to take action is an encouraging layer to a character who is often unmotivated and sedentary.


    You get a pretty good sense of Henry’s views and values throughout the book and the small town has a plethora of other characters. In some ways, the novel reads as a series of portraits and I find the characters to be pretty nicely developed. That said, Schnabel breaks a central rule of literary fiction: characters are introduced and shortly after are provided long monologues expressing their views, intentions, and life stories. There’s a transparency (or perhaps authenticity) to the characters that gives them a charm, even if the writer inside me keeps shouting to show not tell. It’s especially strange because, presumably, Henry has known these people for years and in a small town everyone knows each others’ business, but it just so happens to be the case that in the duration of the novel they pour their hearts out. Just suspend your disbelief a little bit, deal?


    Of Henry’s interactions with other characters, I find the most beautiful and compelling to be his friendship with Josh, who is an effective foil for Henry. Josh moved to “the city” years earlier to make a life for himself, but still maintains a correspondence with Henry. The two write letters back and forth, and Josh continually encourages Henry to come join him, but Henry is always held up by being too broke for a bus ticket. There’s a tragic bent to their friendship, where Josh seems to really want the best for Henry, but Henry is too stunted to make a move for himself. What really resonated for me, though, is that the two bond over a comic series called Memory Currency [a title which reappears as a song on Schnabel’s album The Teenage Years of the 21st Century]. The fictional (?) comic is described in a really compelling way, where the artist seems to perpetually shift. The two characters have been reading the comic for years but can’t make sense of it, though they come to some interpretive breakthroughs (the comic is the writer dreaming his audience? the continual changes of the central character’s design signal a shift in direction or a new concept being introduced?). I really liked the way they spoke about that and it rang so true in a way some of the dialogue does not.


    I am hesitant to spoil the ending of the book because it revolves around Henry’s friendship with Josh. There is some carefully placed foreshadowing around 40 pages before the climax of the book and while I had somewhat predicted what would happen, the delivery in the final pages of the book is fantastic. The devil’s in the details, but the tension of the final scene is very well-crafted and heartbreaking, with the novel’s final line being a nice encapsulation of the central theme of the book: “The easiest thing in this world is to become the very thing you fear the most.”


    The book is laced with tragedy. Even moments that inspire rage are given a kind of pity that is hard to ignore; people often talk about how we need to be united in these divisive times, and the sympathy Henry (and Schnabel) extend to others seems a good model for how to start. There are some non-starters (when little white boys are play fighting, Henry extends sympathy for their small town lives, but when they use the N-word he says “fuck ‘em” and walks off), but in most cases Henry finds ways of being sympathetic to others (when a drug addict he knows tries to rob the convenience store he accidentally shoots a gun at Henry and Henry makes sure not to report the culprit to the police).


    There’s a powerful scene that I think encapsulates the tenderness of Henry’s character. One night, his grandfather has an episode and Henry’s mother and grandmother have to go out looking for him. When they find him, he has a shotgun and after they seem to calm him down, he walks up to his wife and daughter and kills himself in front of them. Henry doesn’t get the details of what happened until a few years later, but he knows something has happened. The tenderness and self-effacement he demonstrates in the morning is beautiful. Henry narrates that he had been up all night and “when [he] pretended to wake up that morning, [he] rose slowly, making noise to let my mother know that I was awake” (76). He shows such consideration for his mother where he does not want to take her off guard, and then he “walked slowly across the shag carpet. [He] gave [his] mother a short hug and said good morning” (76). There’s something touching about the way he mothers his mother in the scene, and it’s met with a beautiful and devastating reciprocity:


“She asked if I wanted a bowl of cereal.


I said I did.


The only other thing I remember is that we were out of milk” (76).


The scene is beautifully constructed with a devastating event, moments of tenderness, and it’s then undercut by a reminder of the poverty of the central characters. The structure of the novel is set up in a series of short chapters, which gives Schnabel the opportunity to deliver short gut punches strategically to punctuate the central points of the main story.


    When it comes to the main story, I suppose you could say that it’s about Henry wanting to leave town, though it’s a portrait of the town as much as anything. About halfway through the novel, there’s a central event that precipitates a number of changes. Henry witnesses a car accident where the driver runs a red light and runs over a little girl. The driver is a scumbag who keeps offering defences for why it’s the girl’s fault. Meanwhile, Henry moves the girl from under the car and cradles her in his arms, singing to her while she passes away. Schnabel returns to the idea several times that she gets heavier and that’s when Henry knows she has died, even before it’s confirmed. It’s a devastating touch.


    The little girl’s death catalyzes a number of deep conversations with people who are concerned for his well-being. The best, in my opinion, is the conversation Henry has with the owner of the convenience store. In that scene, the reactions in the conversation seem true and Schnabel uses one of the best examples of personification that comes to mind in my recent reading. The boss “stops talking for a beat, as if he’s waiting for me to stop him. I don’t say anything. The hum of the cooler seems to get louder for a moment, but I know it’s just the silence turning up the volume on us” (66). I love that line for two reasons: one, it just feels like an experience I’ve had where all of a sudden noise gets louder at an awkward moment. The second is that in the construction of the sentence, the silence is turning up the volume of the cooler—something that is soundless driving up the sound of something else is a compelling line, and I like that it can also be read as silence turning up its own volume. 


    This paragraph will spoil a key plot point, so skip ahead two paragraphs (or just listen to my playlist for a while and scroll). Following the little girl’s death, a revelation comes to light that seems to me to be too coincidental. The girl’s dad is a real scumbag who doesn’t care about his daughter dying because her mom cut him out of her life. He returns to town now in the hopes of ‘being there’ for his ex, but he’s an alcoholic that seems incapable of being there even for himself. There’s a sequence of events that seems improbable: Josh comes to town to check on Henry and they get into a fight with the girl’s dad, Rick. Rick later shows up at Henry’s apartment and robs and attacks him with a knife. At the end of the altercation, it’s revealed that Rick is Henry’s long lost dad.


    Beyond the coincidence, there’s a bit of a contradiction in the text. Henry judges Rick for being a terrible father to the girl and Rick says that even though he was bad, she was his blood and so he still has a claim to her as his daughter. The underlying message seems to be that blood is not so important as connection and actually doing the work of maintaining relationships, which I can endorse. After Henry realizes the girl was his half-sister, though, he starts referring to her as his sister pretty consistently. It’s an interesting contradiction, since he only met her a few moments before her death and yet now claims that bond. Initially I chalked up the inconsistency to some underlying biases that slipped into the text, but the more I think about it the more it seems like it’s another example of the final line’s aphorism: “The easiest thing in this world is to become the very thing you fear the most.” He never wants to be like his deadbeat father, and yet despite his best efforts here he is replicating that same narrative that allows Rick to be a father without performing fatherhood. It’s a pretty clever spin, actually.


    Overall, Hello, My Name Is Henry is a touching novel that delivers all the genuine sincerity of Schnabel’s music, if sometimes more prosaic than necessary. That said, the more I think about the book the more I like it. Writing this review has forced me to process some of the things I overlooked or dismissed during my reading. The novel has that meandering quality that is the taste of many, encapsulating something like a complicated kindness by Miriam Toews or even a less problematic The Catcher in the Rye. There’s a lot of positives for Schnabel’s debut novel, and I’m confident that with a second novel we would see a continued refinement of his writing style, incorporating more of the poetic quality from his music.


    I recognize my own position here as a reviewer of books: I know that when I recommend a book to you, it could take days or weeks or months or years before you get around to it. I have the rare opportunity here to make a more immediate recommendation. Do yourself a favour and listen to some of Micah Schnabel’s music while you wait for your online independent bookstore order to arrive.


    Happy reading!


Listening Playlist:

#33 Dryer

Jazz and Cinnamon Toast Crunch

Emergency Room

How to Ride a Bike

The Interview

Cash 4 Gold

Hello, My Name Is Henry

Memory Currency

Coin$tar

Cincinnati, Ohio

Oh, What a Bummer

American Throwaway

Gentle Always

Remain Silent

A Celebration

Death Defying Feats

New Shoes